COMMENTS FOR HALLOWEEN STORY 2016

[Ebdim9th]

And also

Very good! I'm intrigued and ready for more!

The Graylands (Part Two) Ebdim9th

I love your visuals - the floating Escher-like city... the undead materializing in front of a jetliner (that made me smile lol). Very interesting! Good job!

(somehow ya'll got left out of the first quote list)

 

[hossenpepper]

You all everybody!!!!!!!!

So you're really Charlie from the band Drive Shaft, eh? I always knew Lost wasn't just a TV show!!!

 

[Ebdim9th]

*takes marker and writes not penny's boat on his hand and places it on computer screen*

 

[Nomik]

Awesome job, Eb! Great follow up, leading us further into this adventure. Nice character addition!

 

[Nomik]

So you're really Charlie from the band Drive Shaft, eh? I always knew Lost wasn't just a TV show!!!

I had completely forgotten about that reference! There I was, racking my brain, thinking "where have I heard that song before?" Lost!!!

 

[Leif]

GNTLGNT got off to a great start and Ebdim9th ran with it!!! Fabulous. What can I say? These two writers got everyone thinking and fired up. It was a pleasure working with each and every creative mind. Hardly any tricks and lots of treats to follow.

Leif

 

[GNTLGNT]

....whew!....so many compliments for my intro....folks, I'll be honest...I had very little idea in mind what I was going to do when I sat down with my laptop that morning...I just hacked out some stuff and prayed that it wouldn't embarrass me...I don't fancy myself a writer, there are others so much more talented that have shared their advice and kindness-for that I am very grateful...and Phil?...you took the Biter Baton and ran with it so gracefully...damn that was tasty...

 

[HollyGolightly]

And also




(somehow ya'll got left out of the first quote list)

Just to clarify - when I say "y'all" I mean "all y'all, er'body.

 

[Samantha_]

Ebdim9th - friend that I haven't met. That's really an awesome piece; I got it the whole way. That's about the biggest compliment I can give. Nice job.

 

[FlakeNoir]

Really great job Ebdim9th, very smooth from intro to second part.
(and yes, the 50 Shades reference was fantastic)

 

[ghost19]

Great job to both GNT and Ebdim9th on the story. Kudos....

 

[Shoesalesman]

Fantastic start, both of you! Take a bow and twirl a bit.

 

[niro]

You did a really great job GNT with the beginning. And the second part was great as well Ebdim9th. I love the story this year, it's great.

 

[Ebdim9th]

Awesome job, Eb! Great follow up, leading us further into this adventure. Nice character addition!

GNTLGNT got off to a great start and Ebdim9th ran with it!!! Fabulous. What can I say? These two writers got everyone thinking and fired up. It was a pleasure working with each and every creative mind. Hardly any tricks and lots of treats to follow.

Leif

....whew!....so many compliments for my intro....folks, I'll be honest...I had very little idea in mind what I was going to do when I sat down with my laptop that morning...I just hacked out some stuff and prayed that it wouldn't embarrass me...I don't fancy myself a writer, there are others so much more talented that have shared their advice and kindness-for that I am very grateful...and Phil?...you took the Biter Baton and ran with it so gracefully...damn that was tasty...

Ebdim9th - friend that I haven't met. That's really an awesome piece; I got it the whole way. That's about the biggest compliment I can give. Nice job.

Really great job Ebdim9th, very smooth from intro to second part.
(and yes, the 50 Shades reference was fantastic)

Great job to both GNT and Ebdim9th on the story. Kudos....

Fantastic start, both of you! Take a bow and twirl a bit.

You did a really great job GNT with the beginning. And the second part was great as well Ebdim9th. I love the story this year, it's great.

And very much thanks to the rest of ye as well....

...Y'all all er'body *wink an' a nod to Holly*

 

[Ebdim9th]

Dana Jean, and Flake, under your avatars I first read it as: "Better, Faster, Moderator"

 

[Debbie913]

Great job, Ebdim9th! I enjoyed your addition very much. I think this year's story is going to be a good one.

 

[FlakeNoir]

Dana Jean, and Flake, under your avatars I first read it as: "Better, Faster, Moderator"

You clearly haven't seen us run...

 

[Haunted]

Niro: You have introduced quite a human character and have elevated the danger and creepiness of the story. THANKS for your addition!

 

[GNTLGNT]

You clearly haven't seen us run...

 

[GNTLGNT]

....NIRO rocks!....NIRO rocks!!!!!!....