COMMENTS FOR HALLOWEEN STORY 2016
- Thread starter Dana Jean
- Start date
-
This message board permanently closed on June 30th, 2020 at 4PM EDT and is no longer accepting new members.
Excellent start, Scott! I loved it. Really good job! I'm really looking forward to how the story plays out this year. 
...thank you sweetheart....Excellent start, Scott! I loved it. Really good job! I'm really looking forward to how the story plays out this year.
Just a reminder, the story segments will post Monday, Wednesday and Friday -- no weekends.
Thank you again, Scott! Great work. An honor to be a writingbuddy with you this year!
S-s-s-smokin' start Scott-man-dude! You know I liked it! Gonna get high, so high (on great storytelling, what else did you think I meant?)... we all shoulda worked that song in there somehow ......
Scott, there is really nothing further I can say except, I meant to post this yesterday!
Now that I've had a whole day to think of something profound: thank you, working with you is a privilege. Epic intro, my friend.
Now that I've had a whole day to think of something profound: thank you, working with you is a privilege. Epic intro, my friend.
The Graylands (Part Two) Ebdim9th
I love your visuals - the floating Escher-like city... the undead materializing in front of a jetliner (that made me smile lol). Very interesting! Good job!
I love your visuals - the floating Escher-like city... the undead materializing in front of a jetliner (that made me smile lol). Very interesting! Good job!
Ebdim9th -- excellent addition. Like the "Fifty Undistinguishable Shades of Grayland". Great writing!
Edim9th-Good job! Keeps the story going well.
He-he. Well ain't that fun?
Both parts have been good and enjoyable, but Scott...man, you're missing a trick. Great opening. Between that and SK's Cookie Jar story, I'm about ready to chuck my pen and pads in the bin.
Really looking forward to the rest now.
Both parts have been good and enjoyable, but Scott...man, you're missing a trick. Great opening. Between that and SK's Cookie Jar story, I'm about ready to chuck my pen and pads in the bin.
Really looking forward to the rest now.
Dear Ebdim9th, you have drawn for us a new race of 'biters'! I like Mz Spidey loved the 50 Indistinguishable shades of Grey reference. THANKS!
The second chapter is a great read. Ebdim9th's section had a good balance of explaining things, but at the same time, keeping things mysterious, if you know what I mean; maybe the best way to put it is that nothing was handed to us directly. I'm trying to think about what may come, but at the same time have no idea, which is good since it is always fun to be surprised. And, yes, I too liked the fifty-shades line, I would never have been able to come up with a reference like that; it adds a nice touch.
I know what you mean, I'm a hobbyist writer myself, and I'm not sure I could compare well against them!
I know what you mean, I'm a hobbyist writer myself, and I'm not sure I could compare well against them!
Thanks to
You all everybody!!!!!!!!
Yay, Phil!!!
He-he. Well ain't that fun?
Both parts have been good and enjoyable, but Scott...man, you're missing a trick. Great opening. Between that and SK's Cookie Jar story, I'm about ready to chuck my pen and pads in the bin.
Really looking forward to the rest now.
d
You all everybody!!!!!!!!