First I must agree with one of the other posters, I thought I caught a time/technology gaff, but I cant remember where or what it was.
I probably sound like a complete fool saying this, but twice Mike said to Devin "be careful, it's not white" though neither of them new what it meant. I assume they were talking about Lane's hair, but did Stephen ever mention that in the book? I thought it would become a bigger deal. I guess it doesn't matter, I was just curious.
Anyway loved the story, or perhaps I just love the way Stephen writes so much I would love any story he wrote. All Good!
I probably sound like a complete fool saying this, but twice Mike said to Devin "be careful, it's not white" though neither of them new what it meant. I assume they were talking about Lane's hair, but did Stephen ever mention that in the book? I thought it would become a bigger deal. I guess it doesn't matter, I was just curious.
Anyway loved the story, or perhaps I just love the way Stephen writes so much I would love any story he wrote. All Good!