Apartment dwellers find themselves trapped inside their building. This novel was the genesis for Steve's later novel, Under the Dome.
Dear SKMBers,
As most of you know, I have a novel coming out in November called Under the Dome. My first effort to write it came in 1978, or thereabouts. That seventy-page manuscript (actually titled Under the Dome) was lost, but after reviewing the stuff I said about it in Douglas Winter’s book, The Art of Darkness (1989), I got thinking about my second effort to write that story, which, as you will find out, deals with people trapped in an increasingly lethal environment.
That second try was mostly written in Pittsburgh, during the filming of Creepshow. I spent two months in a depressing suburban apartment complex that became (with the usual fictional tweaks) the setting for the story. It was called The Cannibals, and this time I got a lot further—almost five hundred pages—before hitting a wall. I assumed the manuscript was lost. Long story short, it turned up—battered, and with some pages missing, but mostly complete—in the summer of 2009. So, for your amusement, and as an appetizer to Under the Dome, here are the first sixty pages or so of The Cannibals, reproduced, warts and all, from the original manuscript which was dredged up by Ms. Mod from a locked cabinet in a back room of my office. I’m amused by the antique quality of the typescript; this may have been the last thing I did on my old IBM Selectric before moving on to a computer system.
There’s another reason for publishing this on the website. Several Internet writers have speculated on a perceived similarity between Under the Dome and The Simpsons Movie, where, according to Wikipedia, Homer’s town of Springfield is isolated inside a large glass dome (probably because of that pesky nuclear power plant). I can’t speak personally to this, because I have never seen the movie, and the similarity came as a complete surprise to me…although I know, from personal experience, that the similarity will turn out to be casual. Unless there’s deliberate copying (sometimes known as “plagiarism”), stories can no more be alike than snowflakes. The reason is simple: no two human imaginations are exactly alike. For the doubters, this excerpt should demonstrate that I was thinking dome and isolation long before Homer, Marge, and their amusing brood came on the scene.
I hope you enjoy this. As always, Ms. Mod and I welcome your comments.
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Community Thoughts:
Posted By: Heidi - 02/14/2010 - 12:15 AM EST
In the opening of the Simpson's movie Bart's riding the skateboard naked. I'm getting a really strange image in my head what Mr. King would think of doing with that in a his version. :) As for the similarity-yeh-eh. Steve's the most original guy around. Read Under the Dome and loved it- of course! Read the Cannibals and keep hoping for more! That could turn into another story all together!
Posted By: Danny - 02/10/2010 - 6:07 AM EST
I'm totally stoked reading this. (I'm on page 25 now.) Cool thing is I get to read this BEFORE I get to read "Under the Dome." Very exciting stuff. Very creepy. And I live in an apartment complex too, which makes it that much more fun to read when the moon is full, and everyone's asleep. :)
Posted By: Merdoc - 02/05/2010 - 7:28 PM EST
thank you for sharing this with all of us! personally I love seeing it with warts and all, it makes it more of a unique reading experience, and more importantly, something special.
Posted By: James - 02/03/2010 - 10:54 PM EST
Could you finish the story.... just for us. Pleeeeeaaaase i need to know what happens. btw youre a fantastic writer! really tense stuff.
Posted By: Alice - 02/03/2010 - 6:18 PM EST
This story is awesome. PLEASE finish it. I am but one of your many humble "Constant Readers", however, I'm a-beggin you. It's interesting that there is no "main" character in this story yet. Although that may play out later. Kind of reminds me of The Stand in that way. As always, thank you for your stories.