Your writing seems very professional and it's quite vivid, mysterious, and I'm intrigued as to what's going to happen next.
I sense some interesting backstory, as well. Keep us the good work.
Thank you, everyone, for your contribution. And Ms. Mod- it's a very beautiful dedication to John!
Garriga-Part Two was wonderfully splendid with details of the city, its history and the people from before and the present and tossed with a lot of mystery!! Crisp dialogue, vibrant characters.! Thank you!
Samantha: WOW-You have created an extremely tense and grim scene with the really terrible Francesco and his minions. Good to know blessed ground still has its power! Thank you
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