2012 Message Board Valentine Story Comments

[Moderator]

Here's the thread for your feedback.

[Becks19]

Pat, Very nicely done. ( you ought to write a book) The dedication to Sai John is beautiful. He would have loved the Zombie theme.

[Spideyman]

Beautiful dedication.
You never cease to amaze, Patrick. Your writing style is awesome. Fantastic start to the valentine's day story!!

[Haunted]

Well, Chuckles, you have set the gruesome scene for the bloody day and I look forward to meeting the other characters with whom you have decked your intro!

[arista]

This has started out as a really good story!! I always look forward to the stories that everyone contributes. Sai John would be very proud of this one starting out so well.

[GNTLGNT]

Pat is THE man...'stead of THE MAN chasin' him!...how's that feel pard?

[PatInTheHat]

Pat is THE man...'stead of THE MAN chasin' him!...how's that feel pard?

And don't I just know it, it's like I keep tryin' to tell 'em................

Thanks ever so much y'all, the all ya can drink deeeelicious frozen Daiquiris buffet is on me.

[SherLynn]

Great start to the story, really enjoyed it!!

[Garriga]

Well done Patrick. Very creative and original.

[fushingfeef]

Wow, Pat. You write like a Jimi Hendrix guitar solo! Looking forward to more.