
Originally Posted by
diem_seven
No, I couldn't, even if it only meant the minor repercussion of a slimmer wallet to see misfortune slide into the life of a person who irks me something awful.
This story made me recall an Amazing Stories episode where a person was given a box with a button on it, and if they pressed the button they would become very rich and someone who they didn't know would die. Well, of course they pressed the button, and someone they didn't know croaked. When the keeper of the button box came to collect the artifact, he told the button-presser that they were rich and that someone they didn't know would now be given the button box.
In Fair Extension, I kept waiting for the scales to balance out. Somehow the guy who did the deal would get his just desserts, or maybe his friend would strike a pact with Elvid. No dice. Nearing the end of the story, I had that smug feeling I get when I am pretty dang sure I know where an author is headed. And then it ended with the guy lying to his wife and wishing for more. To me, the story shows the transformation of an everyday man into a slick-skinned proselyte of Hell. *shivers*
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