The Gingerbread Girl

[teejay17]

Nice story, but not my favorite in Just After Sunset I'm afraid...

I found it just a bit too long. It could have been shortened a bit.

[Jay P Lang]

Personally I didn't like the end of it. I thought it was a little to convient for the person chasing to not be able to 'float well' (not trying to give anything away) The build up and story before that was very good though. I especially liked the sentance at the top of each chapter taken from the chapters, though I may have used different ones in some instances.

[peaceluvnsploosh]

Hi,

Personally I thought that it was a perfectly paced, very exciting story.

And I also thought that it would make a great movie in the right hands, and I believe Sai King has already written a movie treatment.

Long days and pleasant nights

I totally agree that this should be made into a movie---- it think it would be a great one

i thought this was a great story!--- id have to say it was my favorite int he just after sunset collection

[CR!P]

BY far my favourite SK short story and I also think it would make a great movie