Secret Windows ... Craft of Writing; I liked much of the book, but was taken aback by some of the fault-finding SK launched at other writers. It seems out of character for an author with humble beginnings and occasional self-deprecating commentary regarding his own abilities. That said, I have to take issue with his analysis of Shirley Jackson's “The Haunting of Hill House” opening paragraph. He started by saying he had neither the skill nor the intent to “kill it or mount it” like a butterfly; the skill part I won't argue, but regardless of intent, murder it he did. His analysis seems backwards! Since Miss Jackson is not around to comment, I can only give my interpretation and let others decide. The opening paragraph in question (on page 90 of the hardcover edition of Secret Windows... Horror Fiction chapter) follows.
No live organism can continue for long to exist sanely under conditions of absolute reality; even larks and katydids are supposed, by some, to dream.
Hill House, not sane, stood by itself against its hills, holding darkness within; it had stood so for eighty years and might stand for eighty more.
Within, walls continued upright, bricks met neatly, floors were firm, and doors were sensibly shut; silence lay steadily against the wood and stone of Hill House,
and whatever walked there, walked alone.
I count three sentences, not the two SK found. Also, the paragraph seems to say Hill House IS alive, and it is insane because it
DOES live under protracted conditions of absolute reality, and cannot dream... SK says Hill House does NOT live under conditions
of absolute reality, and therefore it does not dream, and therefore is insane. Where does that come from in the above text?
Absolute reality for a house is its foundation, its walls, its surroundings, the incessant weather... absolute reality for a lark
is finding food, obtaining a mate, building a nest, not getting eaten by a fox... absolute reality for a katydid is food, mating,
not getting eaten by a lark... the lark and the katydid can dream of better circumstances, perhaps, but the house? Not so much.
Then again, his original Danse Macabre was published in 1981; maybe SK was still under the influence in one way or another... OR, my under-educated self may have missed something entirely. Despite my apparent fault-finding, I generally love SK's works.
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