"The Man Who Would Not Shake Hands" Short Film Trailer

Sometime back my film associate aqquirred the rights to film a short based upon the Stephen King short story " The Man Who Would Not Shake Hands" from Skeleton Crew. We are in post production now, and are still mastering audio. We placed a bunch of easter eggs in as well...especially for dark tower fans. It was done on practically zero budget...here is the trailer, Id love to know what everyone thinks.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I_klVAg6j_s

...not bad, but are the quick edits part of the film as a whole-or just done for the trailer?...if it's for the film, it's a bit jarring...