I hate it when writers say that a character is so frightened, his hair turns white. Get out of town! Even if a person lost all their pigment, it would take the colored hair a while to grow out. Uncle Steve is guilty of this amoung many others.
What are chinos? Does only male characters in books wear them? Maybe it is an American thing? I never see any signs in stores where they sell chinos.
Oh, and please do not hear a scream and discover it is yourself making the noise. That does not work well in real life lol.
Anyway, we haven't had this kind of thread for awhile. Fill your boots!
Last edited by staropeace; March 25th, 2013 at 07:25 PM.