Michal I sense a bit of rudeness when you say how many novels have you published, I'm just saying I could help you I'm guessing like me your proably going through puberty and can proably be a little 'bitchy' lol. No, I haven't written any novels but I have an idea about a kid going to Walmart and uncovering talismanic powers while almost getting kidnapped.
I feel an essential element of writing is also the ability to proofread. It seems you may need more practice in this area since you are addressing Micah as being rude, when he wasn't the poster who asked how many novels you had published...that was Hayla Lathan. I would concentrate on rectifying your own errors--since there are quite a few in your post--before offering to help other writer's fix theirs. No offence intended, but if you feel mature enough to deal out advice, then hopefully you are mature enough to take it.